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PostSubject: [[ Rᴇᴅᴇғɪɴɪɴɢ Cʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ]] -- Character Page    Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:50 pm



-xx- [ RULES ]
[ a n d ]
[ REGULATIONS ] -xx-


    [ Mᴀᴛᴜʀɪᴛʏ & Rᴇɢᴜʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴs ]

Firstly, I must ask that you have a mature level of literacy, violence, romance and plot. This role play will have gore. It will have romance, and it WILL have intense plot. I need those who have open, intelligent minds ready to leap onto the next moving train. I expect top-notch role playing and maturity, and will not accept anything less. Secondly, I must ask that you have read and/or watched The mangas/animes to the end. You MUST have a CLEAR understanding of how everything works, or this role play is going to be much too difficult for you to grasp. I understand small fuzzy areas--I'll be glad to help--but if you're only on episode 9, or you have no freaking idea what the hèll we're talking about, don't bother joining. I don't mean to exclude others by setting up an age limit, but I hope you have the responsibility to tell if this role play is fit for you. Thanks.

    [ Lɪᴛᴇʀᴀᴄʏ & Gʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ ]

This is CORE, kids. There's a REASON almost every role play has this rule, and I enforce it; trust me.
Firstly, I'll set up my expectations for grammar. Number one; sentences. I expect modifiers in those babies, hon! I wanna know every last detail of how she laughed, or the color of the blood as it streamed down her dirty face. A sentence contains a subject and a verb, but I don't want sentences like this: "Astrid walked. She turned. "Hello." She greeted." Huuugaah, huaaagh! Yeah, no. Would you like to try and be MORE boring?
Oh wait, it's not possible, is it?
Next, I see this a lot. CHILDREN! What did we learn in the third grade?! Proper nouns are CAPITALIZED! "Sam; I; Empire State Building". Your sentences start with a CAPITAL letter and end with a PERIOD. This brings up the next thing; punctuation. Commas. Use them. CORRECTLY. If you still can't do this, then hèll, go back and pass third grade English. Another thing is those pesky sound-alikes. Know your "to"s, "theirs" etc. "To" is a direction, "Too" means 'also', and "Two" is a number. "There" is a direction, "Their" is possessive, and "They're" is the compound for "They are". This is a massive pet-peeve of mine. Get it down. One last thing is spelling. If you aren't sure, check it with a dictionary, the Internet, etc. I understand slips sometimes; typos and such. But at least TRY.
Now, secondly...literacy. I can't stress it enough. I am expecting at the very LEAST four sentences in every role play post. I want deep writing, full of thought and passion. I don't want novels, but I DO want intelligence. I will warn you if you are not meeting my expectations!


    [ Cʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀs ]

This is very, very important. Firstly, I will go over limits. There is a member "ranking" on page two. This shows who may have what characters. For example, brand new members are allowed three humans and nothing more, where mods are allowed two Alchemists and as many humans as they wish. You MUST follow these rules. I know it might sound unfair, but a new member is much better off if he has time to adjust to the role play before he leaps in with a rare Alchemist. This also keeps the number of Alchemists in check, and the humans verses Alchemists realistic. Don't think that human characters won't have any power in this role play, either, because you are very wrong. They do, as long as you are willing to give them purpose. That's not my problem; it's yours. Want involved? Make an interesting character with meaning. Comprende? Good. Now, I also have issues with the female>male populations. In the dozens of role plays I've made, it's extremely easy to see that feminine genders are favorites. I understand that a large portion of the role players here are female, but honestly. Because of this, I will now make this rule: Equal genders. If you make a female, you make a male. Understand? They don't have to be the same rank or whatever, like your male could be in the Military and your female a florist in Central, but you must keep the genders equal. I will not accept any "I made my female, but I'll make my male later", either. You make them at the same time, or I will not accept them. Please and thank you.
Now, up next. Forms. Yes, I do want to know your characters height, weight, body figure, shape of their smile, skin color and the way their eyes sparkle when they're happy. I want every. Last. Detail. There is no such thing as a form that is too long, understand? I really want rich characters, too. Each one of your characters should have a fantastic purpose, and if they don't, don't bother making them. By this, I don't mean "They hold the secrets of WORLD ALCHEMY!!" or something. They just have a...purpose. They aren't just a lifeless body 'walking down the street, bored'. They don't have to be some key holder to be a truly beautiful character. Look at Kain Furey, or General Armstrong. Their characters might not mean much to the plot, but they are nonetheless fangirl worthy purely because they have an interesting character. Get it? Purpose. You characters need to have it.
Oh, and one last thing: Yes, this is set fifty years after the original characters. But NO ONE is allowed to have ANY characters with relations to those in the mangas/animes! I have several reasons, but to put it simply, don't ask for one. Also, make original characters, alright? No obvious copies. Be creative! You have a brain; use it! Ah, and one last thing: no Mary-Sues. You know what they are, so don't do them. If you have any questions concerning the content of your character, please ask me here or through email.


    [ Rᴏʟᴇ Pʟᴀʏ Pᴏsᴛs ]

As stated once before, I expect posts to be rich. I want at the very least four, full sentences per post. I expect beautiful literacy, correct grammar and punctuation, and good spelling. I want deep posts as well; no "Coal walked around, bored. There was honestly nothing to do. He wondered where Sara was. It was raining." Shiz. Ok? Make it deep! Passionate! BE the character! I have to step into your character's skin and give them life! See what they see, feel what they feel, taste what they taste! Get it? Alrighty. Now, why don't we tackle Godmodding? You know what it is, so don't do it. I understand Alchemists are powerful, but they are not god, and they DO have limits. You need to understand those limits, and apply them to your role play. This is a major, major pet peeve of mine, and I will not tolerate it. If you agree with the rules so far, Private Message me the word "Suvival".

    [ Aʟᴄʜᴇᴍʏ ]

Yep, we need an entire rule section for this baby. Why? Because I know for a fact people are going to abuse it. I hope that by the time you are able to have an Alchemist character, you will have the responcibility to know all of the following regulations. But just in case, here they are.
Number one. Equivalent Exchange. You cannot create an ice cream cone in the middle of the desert, and you can't make a metal spear when you're standing in a fluffy white room in the mental hospital. Plus, Alchemists have limits. Alchemy takes energy, so you can't just keep going without tiring at all. Only those who have seen the Truth can transmute without a circle, too, so remember that. And I honestly don't plan on letting anyone have that ability at this point.
One other thing that I know will become an issue is the types of Alchemy. I want variety! Creativity! I don't want 7 Agriculture Alchemists and nothing else. I have limits, as stated in post three. Please look those over. I also don't plan on letting anyone have connections with Fire Alchemy. Riza Hawkeye got rid of Fire Alchemy by having Roy Mustang burn the secrets off her back, so I highly doubt anyone else knows how to use Flame Alchemy. Don't ask for it. Just gonna lay that down right here and now. This will also be discussed on post three, but you MUST clear the type of Alchemy you are requesting with me, even before you begin creating your character. Do not do this on this website. Email me. My email is provided on page three as well as page eight. This is my forum email, so Moderators, there are no private information. You must give me a Scientific explanation of the Alchemy to show how it works. It must be accurate. If I approve of the type, I will send you a message with regulations on Alchemists. You will create your character then, send a reply message accepting the rules and attaching your character. I will then reply with either an accept or decline message. If you have any questions, ask.


    [ Aᴄᴛɪᴠɪᴛʏ ]

It's essential, ok? Do not join if you are not assured that you will be on at least four or five times a week. This will be a fast-moving plot, so being active is very important. If you fail to meet this expectation, I will delete you from my role play and you will not be able to join again. If you give me a leave of absence, however, (Vacation, Grounded, Large School Project, Etc.) Then I will excuse you from this rule. But otherwise, I expect active members. If you still agree with the rules, PM me the words "of the"

    [ Rᴏᴍᴀɴᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ Gᴏʀᴇ ]

Keep it PG-13. I do want a deep understanding of pain and death, as well as fighting in the role play, but there does come a point where we really don't wanna know. Same goes for Romance. This forum DOES have younger eyes peering at it, so I expect you to know when to skipperoonie to the next scene which is a little more appropriate. I don't want this role play deleted! I frickin' LABORED over it. So be responsible.

    [ Gᴇᴛᴛɪɴɢ Iɴᴠᴏʟᴠᴇᴅ ]

"I'm always ignored". I don't wanna hear it, I don't wanna see it. I have full right to virtually smack you in the face if you dare utter those three words, or anything related to them. There are PLENTY of opportunities to get involved, so TAKE THEM. If you can't wedge your way into the major plot, then H-LL make a subplot with someone else! Also, don't come whining to me about how your always ignored if I KNOW you don't try. Let's face it: No one really wants to role play with the character that "Walks down the street bored". If you have an interesting character, howeverrr...I'm sure someone would be glad to role play with you! Now, I understand some people might be a little shy. I understand that. So, senior members: try to include the newbies. No one should be left out; this role play was made to enjoy, and I expect it to be. I've noticed it lacks that, though, when someone sits on the lines because they're shy and don't know how to jump in. Newbies: Don't worry! We don't bite! Leap in! Get involved! Or I WILL kick yo skinny a-s in myself!

    [ Tʜᴇ Sᴘᴀᴍ ]

Everyone hates it. Don't do it. I know I can trust a lot of you; we're all family. But let's try not to trash it up with a bunch of links and shit. Another thing is those who pop up and ask us to "Please join my Clan!", or, "Please Take This Poll!" Or whatever. Pop-up-linkers will get reported, no excuses. You have been warned. I don't have any nerve for those who decide to trash our page with their random crud. So. Just don't do it, por favor.

    [ Jᴏɪɴɪɴɢ Mᴇᴛʜᴏᴅs ]

This is where things get a little tricky, so please listen up. Joining this role play will not be like other role plays. The "Joining Page" will serve as a "Characters Page". This is where you can locate full character forms, because the characters posted on the front page will only be short character summaries. Once you join, you will reserve a post or two. This will serve as kind of a mini "topic" for your characters within a topic. You can make it as shmancy as you like, and add as many extra little details that you like. I honestly don't care as long as you at least fill out the things that I expect of you. By all means! Get super creative! Add quotes, a drawing of your character, etc. It's up to you! Your character "page" is all yours. Please do not post questions or chat on the Character Page, though. If you have any questions, post them on the main page, or shoot me an email. I will approve of your character via email or main page as well. The only thing that belongs on the Character Page is Characters. Also, please do not post several times with different characters. Reserve one or two posts, and add characters to these. I will post a link to where your characters can be located on the Character Page underneath each of your character summaries, as well as on the first post of the Character Page. If you are still confused, look at my own post as an example. Still confused, send me an email. Thank you~ If you agree of all the rules, send me an PM with the word "Fittest". This should complete the code phrase. I will not accept your character until I have received a private message with the code word.





[size=18]||- - Tнe Baѕιc Joιngιng Forмѕ - -|| [size]

Remember to please view the "Joining Methods" part of the rules once more! Remember, your form doesn't have to be an exact copy of this. You can jazz it up however you like, but please remember to keep these bulletpoints in there. You may add whatever you want; get creative! They might look like monsters, but I hope you enjoy painting your character into being. Thank you~

-- мιlιтary and alcнeмιѕтѕ --

[ Screen Naмe ;; [ ιnclυde all ѕyмвolѕ, ғancy leттerѕ, and nυмвerѕ ]
[ Cнaracтer Naмe ;; [ ғιrѕт, мιddle & laѕт. ιnvolve any nιcĸnaмeѕ, code naмeѕ, or alcнeмιѕт naмeѕ ]
[ Age ;; [ ѕтaтe alcнeмιѕтѕ: 20 – 60. мιlιтary: 18 – 60 ]
[ Gender: ;; [ мale, ғeмale ]
[ Alcнeмιѕт or No ;; [ ѕelғ-eхplanaтory ]
[ Ranĸ: ;; [ looĸ aт тнe lιѕт. мυѕт вe cleared вy мe. ]
[ Pнyѕιcal Appearance: ;; [ вe eхтreмely deѕcrιpтιve!! ι eхpecт lengтн! ]
[ Perѕonalιтy: ;; [ depтн нere aѕ well! add every laѕт deтaιl. ]
[ Faтal Flaw ;; [ тнιѕ ιѕ wнaт coυld lead yoυr cнaracтer тo deaтн. ]
[ Hιѕтory: ;; [ вe elaвoraтe! add ιn нow yoυr cнaracтer gaιned нιѕ or нer ĸnowledge oғ alcнeмy aѕ well, ιғ тнey’re an alcнeмιѕт. ]
[Alcнeмy Proғeѕѕιon ;; [ looĸ aт тнe lιѕт on page тнree. мυѕт вe cleared вy мe тнroυgн eмaιl. ]
[ Weapon oғ Cнoιce ;; [ тнιѕ ιѕ yoυr мaιn weapon. deѕcrιвe. ]
[ Hoмeтown ;; [ looĸ aт тнe lιѕт on page ғoυr ]
[ Occυpaтιon ;; [ ғor non-ѕoldιerѕ only ]
[ Faмιly/Relaтιonѕнιps ;; [ ιnclυde ѕιѕтerѕ, вroтнerѕ, parenтѕ, cloѕe ғrιendѕ, crυѕнeѕ, ѕpoυѕeѕ and gιrlғrιendѕ/вoyғrιendѕ. ]
[Eхтraѕ/Oтнerѕ ;; [ anyтнιng elѕe yoυ ғιnd neceѕѕary goeѕ нere. ]
[ Cнaracтer Sυммary ;; [ тнιѕ ιѕ тнe ѕυммary тнaт wιll go on тнe ғronт page. pleaѕe ĸeep ιт ѕнorт and ѕweeт, вυт add ιn neceѕѕary coмponenтѕ. мaхιмυм lengтн: 10 lιneѕ. ]
[Saмple Poѕт ;; [ тнιѕ ιѕ an aѕѕeѕѕмenт тo ѕee ιғ yoυ are ғιт ғor мy role play. yoυ need тo only do тнιѕ once. add any color codeѕ ғor yoυr cнaracтer, aѕ well aѕ тнe ғorмaт yoυ мιgнт вe poѕтιng ιn. тнιѕ мυѕт conтaιn тнe мιnιмυм oғ ғιve ѕenтenceѕ, мaхιмυм oғ wнaтever. ]

HUMANS
Screen Name: [ All symbols, fancy letters, and numbers ]
Character Name: [ First, Middle & Last. Involve any Nicknames. ]
Age: [ Infant - 90 ]
Gender: [ Male, Female ]
Residence: [ Where do they live? Look at the map on Page 4 ]
Physical Appearance: [ Be extremely descriptive!! I expect length! ]
Personality: [ Depth here as well! Add every last detail. ]
Fatal Flaw: [ This is what could lead your character to death. ]
History: [ Be elaborate, but brief. ]
Occupation: [ If you need ideas, ask. ]
Family/Relationships: [ Include sisters, brothers, parents, close friends, crushes, spouses and girlfriends/boyfriends. ]
Extras/Others: [ Anything else you find necessary goes here. ]
Character Summary: [ This is the summary that will go on the front page. Please keep it short and sweet, but add in necessary components. Maximum length: 10 lines. ]
Sample Post: [ This is an assessment to see if you are fit for my role play. You need to only do this once. Add any color codes for your character, as well as the format you might be posting in. This must contain the minimum of five sentences, maximum of whatever. ]



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PostSubject: Re: [[ Rᴇᴅᴇғɪɴɪɴɢ Cʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ]] -- Character Page    Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:50 pm

[[ M I L I T A R Y and A L C H E M I S T S ]]





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PostSubject: Re: [[ Rᴇᴅᴇғɪɴɪɴɢ Cʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ]] -- Character Page    Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:51 pm

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Alchemists and Military

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PostSubject: Re: [[ Rᴇᴅᴇғɪɴɪɴɢ Cʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ]] -- Character Page    Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:23 am

-- Clove's charrie save #2 --


-- мιlιтary and alcнeмιѕтѕ --

[ Screen Naмe ;; [ ιnclυde all ѕyмвolѕ, ғancy leттerѕ, and nυмвerѕ ]
[ Cнaracтer Naмe ;; [ Maxine Grayson ;; Max ]
[ Age ;; [ 27 ]
[ Gender: ;; [ ғeмale ]
[ Alcнeмιѕт or No ;; [ Uh, no? ]
[ Ranĸ: ;; [ looĸ aт тнe lιѕт. мυѕт вe cleared вy мe. ]
[ Pнyѕιcal Appearance: ;; [ Physical Appearance: [To start off, Max isn't a priss. She's not afraid to get dirty, although she prefers staying rather in between. She has long, dark hair that often changes color depending on how she styles it. But usually, it's in its casual look, either in a messy bun, or down, hanging over her shoulders. Her hair can often be found with some blonde streaks among the brunette and is has the silk and shine that every girl wants. She has warm, vibrant caramel colored eyes with a dark brown ring around it. Her look? She wears everyday clothes that are usually tight enough to show her figure, or she wears a baggy jacket as well. She has attractive feminine curves and very few freckles splashed over the bridge of her nose, and well tanned skin and nice, chocolate colored layered side-bangs that neatly drape over her left eye like a curtain. Her voice is usually smooth, but grows more commanding in a crisis or in danger. She's around 5'11 and has a sweet, fun complexion, but she's pretty daring when the time comes. As says the expression in her eyes when you're on her bad side. She's definately not afraid to show what she feels in her expression. Of course, that's when she's off duty. When she's on duty she wears {insert military clothing description here} and she would sacrifice her life for anybody in her squad.]
[color:RED][[/color][color:BLACK] Perѕonalιтy: [/color][color:RED] ;;[/color][color:BLACK] [ Max is fun. She's good to be around, and enjoys her friends company. She's defiant and very brave, she will stand up to anyone in a higher power any day. Well, kinda. If she works up the nerve. She's pretty cool around others, has a strong temper, and is like a softie in a tough shell, ya know? Oh, don't get on her bad side. Seriously. She's beat you to death with a sock full of butter. Or something along those lines. So whoop de doo. She's calm and collected and can get terrified of anything the points a weapon threateningly at her. She refuses to wield a weapon in a crisis and likes to sneak around. She often gets herself into really bad situations due to her ADHD, and she is really empathetic. A little kid gives her the puppy dog eyes and the next thing she knows, she's massaging their feet and feeding them chocolates. She doesn't really trust anybody and she does forgive, but he never ever forgets. She's not much of a cryer, but she'll cry if A.) Someone close to her died B.) If she died and came back to life C.) If its really a crying moment. Comebacks come naturally to her and she's ok at street fighting, but she prefers to stay nice. Calm. Collected. In combat, she shows her dangerous side, fighting with extreme energy, stealth, and danger in her stride. ] [/color]
[color:RED][[/color][color:BLACK] Faтal Flaw [/color][color:RED] ;;[/color][color:BLACK] [ Fatal Flaw: [ Fatal Flaw? Max loves action. She lives excitement, so she'll try to play hero when the time comes. Even if it involves injury. When danger prevails and her friends, loved one's, or a little kid is in the midst, she will jump to the rescue. The doesn't always turn out pretty, but she will do anything to help her friends. Max refuses to tell anybody any big secrets. Trust nobody ands stay alive right? Wrong. She's too paranoid that their will be an assault or a mile
In her squad.] [/color]
[color:RED][[/color][color:BLACK] Hιѕтory: [/color][color:RED] ;;[/color][color:BLACK] [ вe elaвoraтe! add ιn нow yoυr cнaracтer gaιned нιѕ or нer ĸnowledge oғ alcнeмy aѕ well, ιғ тнey’re an alcнeмιѕт. ] [/color]
[color:RED][[/color][color:BLACK]Alcнeмy Proғeѕѕιon [/color][color:RED] ;;[/color][color:BLACK] [ looĸ aт тнe lιѕт on page тнree. мυѕт вe cleared вy мe тнroυgн eмaιl. ] [/color]
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PostSubject: Re: [[ Rᴇᴅᴇғɪɴɪɴɢ Cʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴏɴ ]] -- Character Page    Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:58 pm

-- Clove's charrie save #2 --


-- мιlιтary and alcнeмιѕтѕ --

[ Screen Naмe ;; [ Çłøναħ(: ]
[ Cнaracтer Naмe ;; [ Maxine Grayson ;; Max ]
[ Age ;; [ 27 ]
[ Gender: ;; [ ғeмale ]
[ Alcнeмιѕт or No ;; [ Uh, no? ]
[ Ranĸ: ;; [ Second Leuitenant ]
[ Pнyѕιcal Appearance: ;; [ Physical Appearance: [To start off, Max isn't a priss. She's not afraid to get dirty, although she prefers staying rather in between. She has long, dark hair that often changes color depending on how she styles it. But usually, it's in its casual look, either in a messy bun, or down, hanging over her shoulders. Her hair can often be found with some blonde streaks among the brunette and is has the silk and shine that every girl wants. She has warm, vibrant caramel colored eyes with a dark brown ring around it. Her look? She wears everyday clothes that are usually tight enough to show her figure, or she wears a baggy jacket as well. She has attractive feminine curves and very few freckles splashed over the bridge of her nose, and well tanned skin and nice, chocolate colored layered side-bangs that neatly drape over her left eye like a curtain. Her voice is usually smooth, but grows more commanding in a crisis or in danger. She's around 5'11 and has a sweet, fun complexion, but she's pretty daring when the time comes. As says the expression in her eyes when you're on her bad side. She's definately not afraid to show what she feels in her expression. Of course, that's when she's off duty. When she's on duty she wears {insert military clothing description here} and she would sacrifice her life for anybody in her squad.]
[ Perѕonalιтy: ;; [ Max is fun. She's good to be around, and enjoys her friends company. She's defiant and very brave, she will stand up to anyone in a higher power any day. Well, kinda. If she works up the nerve. She's pretty cool around others, has a strong temper, and is like a softie in a tough shell, ya know? Oh, don't get on her bad side. Seriously. She's beat you to death with a sock full of butter. Or something along those lines. So whoop de doo. She's calm and collected and can get terrified of anything the points a weapon threateningly at her. She refuses to wield a weapon in a crisis and likes to sneak around. She often gets herself into really bad situations due to her ADHD, and she is really empathetic. A little kid gives her the puppy dog eyes and the next thing she knows, she's massaging their feet and feeding them chocolates. She doesn't really trust anybody and she does forgive, but he never ever forgets. She's not much of a cryer, but she'll cry if A.) Someone close to her died B.) If she died and came back to life C.) If its really a crying moment. But she's not a baby, and it takes alot to make her cry. Comebacks come naturally to her and she's ok at street fighting, but she prefers to stay nice. Calm. Collected. In combat, she shows her dangerous side, fighting with extreme energy, stealth, and danger in her stride. ]
[ Faтal Flaw ;; [ Fatal Flaw: [ Fatal Flaw? Max loves action. She loves excitement, so she'll try to play hero when the time comes. Even if it involves injury. When danger prevails and her friends, loved one's, or a little kid is in the midst, she will jump to the rescue. It's kinda her thing. Even if it involves breaking a rule or an order, an human life is above other value to her. The doesn't always turn out pretty, but she will do anything to help her friends. Max refuses to tell anybody any big secrets. Trust nobody ands stay alive right? Wrong. She's too paranoid that their will be an assault or a mole in her squad.]
[ Hιѕтory: ;; [ Max had a pretty normal childhood. She grew up on the outskirts of East City, born to her mother, Casey Grayson, at the age of 23. Her father was a very talented surgeon, Dr. Thomas Elliot, and he took pride in his work, making enough money to feed his family. Her mother was in the military, and Max constantly dreamed of her future in battle, just like mom. Until, when Max was about eight, her mother was killed in battle. It wasn't a big blow on Max, however young and vulnerable she was, her parents never taught her much emotion. Before she knew it, the stress of her mothers death had cost her father his job, and he killed his next patient and went on the run with Max. 
Fleeing to Rush Valley, Max and Dr. Elliot lived there until she was twelve, homeless and alone, fetching scraps of food from garbage cans and leftovers. The Doctor was 'planning' his revenge on the military and eventually signing up to pose as a military surgeon. Max taught herself basic combat moves and practiced until the age of thirteen, when she confronted her father before he went to his new job. He didn't put up much of a fight and both went their seperate ways, Max to East City once more, Dr. Elliot to his new job, where he carved the face off of the first military operative he got his hands on. With his fourth victim, he was caught and fled back to Rush Valley. Max enlisted in military school at age 20, and at 27 she is now a Second Lieutenant in Squad 188. Along with the whole 'murderer father' thing, max discovered a newfound bravery, and courage, and an urge to help others.
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[Alcнeмy Proғeѕѕιon ;; [ She ain't no Alchemist xD]
[ Weapon oғ Cнoιce ;; [ I dunno. A gun, thats black and about the size of her head. It has about 17 22 Excalibur Stainless Steel bullets and she has a store of more ammo at the base of her miitary operations. It has an almost invisible and optional scope that sends an invisible dot to land prescicely on her target, and can only be seen with special military eyewear. ]
[ Hoмeтown ;; [ East City ]
[ Occυpaтιon ;; [ ғor non-ѕoldιerѕ only ]
[ Faмιly/Relaтιonѕнιps ;; [ Casey Grayson--Max's mother. She was very close and died in battle.
Dr. Thomas Elliot--Max's mass murderer father. They were never close, and grew an even rage at eachother once Max discovered his ways of murder. He slits their vocal cords in surgery and carves their faces off, bandaging them and hangin the Fce on the wall before fleeing.
Her Squad-- Max's squad is her family and friends. What she has left. She cares for each and every one of them.
Brigiander General Coal Nightbird-- Max doesn't 'like like' him, but she admires him for his pride. She feels that he's the only one who understands what a 'bad history' is, even though she hasn't heard much about his. They're not as close as Max wished them to be, but being in his squad is like some big honor to her, though she treats him as everyone else does.

[Eхтraѕ/Oтнerѕ ;; [ You really don't want to get on her bad side because boy, shoot to kill permission granted in her little world. The old Max is still in there. ]
[ Cнaracтer Sυммary ;; [ Max has long brown hair that falls in delicate spirals around her shoulders, vibrant streaks of strawberry blonde merging with the look. She has dark, unforgiving and sharp but welcoming brown eyes that seem kinda take everything in, and only let few emotions escape her control. She's not exactly a priss, but hit a nerve and crap, shoot to kill permission granted. She will go all out on you and is a natural at snapping quick, dirty comebacks. She's had a rather horrible hostory that I won't get into, war hero mother and delusional, bipolar mass murderer father. ^^'. Max is sweet, funny, and cares deeply about each and every man and woman on her Squad, 188. However, her friends are her fatal flaw; if any of them are in danger, she will personally sacrifice herself for them, or will surrender herself to save them. She carries a 22 Excalibur Gun with 17 bullets and watch out; she's got really good aim. She completes orders quickly and never has an attitude to someone who doesn't direct on at her first. ]

Max slipped down the shadowed street. Darkness cloaked her form in an ominous veil, her eyes betraying her as they tried to see past the obnoxious mist. Her finger laced the trigger of her gun, muscles tensed as she proceded down the alley and next to a small building, opening the foggy glass door and stepping inside.

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[ Screen Naмe ;; [ Çłøναħ(: ]
[ Cнaracтer Naмe ;; [ Sebastian Michaeliss ]
[ Age ;; [ 25 ]
[ Gender: ;; [ мale ]
[ Alcнeмιѕт or No ;; [ Uh, no? ]
[ Ranĸ: ;; [ First Leuitenant ]
[ Pнyѕιcal Appearance: ;; [ Well. The childhood nickname 'Pretty Boy' doesn't come hand in hand, but he's not ugly. He has messy, shoulder length black hair and sharp, defiant ice blue eyes that pretty much shoot daggers at you, if he's not doing that physically. He's like, pretty tall, hitting around 6'3 and you can say that he looks always angry. His expression never crosses over to happy. He never smiles, laughs, or even talks to people. He is well muscled, has a butt chin, and kinda resembles an emo Heath Ledger.
[ Perѕonalιтy: ;; [ Only two word can describe him. Emo, and EVILEVILEVILEVIL. I swear, he gives off that vibe that says 'Come within 5 feet of me and IMM SHANK YOU.' He is cold, antisocial, and unforgiving. No living soul has dared puncture his living hell, and nobody will probably ever. He fights with an unreleased fury that he barelt hold in when not in battle. He's like...an ostridge. Always has his head in the dirt. [metaphorically, of course.] The only physical beings that go underground are the bodies buried of the people he kills. Like i said, evillllllll. Cold-hearted, and he's that close to ditching his squad, but has no other way to release his anger but in battle. ]
[ Faтal Flaw ;; [ Fatal Flaw: [ Sebastian doesn't care. Like, about anything. If he gets shot, oh well. He doesn't care about people, places, or things. And that's probably how he'll stay for the rest of the life he lives. ]
[ Hιѕтory: ;; [
Sebastian had a very emotional childhood. His mother was diagnosed with lung cancer when he was six, and his father never cared. Just, didn't. His parents were separated, but they still lived together because his father was required to care for her. Sebastian blew his top very quickly at the age of thirteen. He got tired of his father always drunk, depressed, blaming him for the things that happen to his mother. He was tired of listening to his mothers cries, her wrenching and coughing, the blood on the bed sheet. She was able to resist her disease until one day, she died. That's when Sebastian left. He fled to the poverty of Rush Valley, cold-hearted, unforgiving, taken in by random huddles of homeless men at night, fighting them for food in the morning. He excelled at combat from his time on the streets, and at age 20 he decided to join the military, feeling an unbridled fury build up inside f him and only to be let out through violence. His mother's death was very hard on him, breaking his heart and leaving him with no emotion at all. He is a First Lieutenant in Squad 188, and refuses to fight with guns, keeping an emergency pistol in his boot just incase, but fighting with daggers. What a disturbed boy. He discovered his father committed suicide years later. It sent a surge of satisfaction through him, and he uncovered his cold, horrible heart.

[Alcнeмy Proғeѕѕιon ;; [ He ain't no Alchemist xD]
[ Weapon oғ Cнoιce ;; [ I dunno. He's got twin daggers, which he keeps in black sheaths on each side of his waist, attached to his belt. He's highly skilled with them.]
[ Hoмeтown ;; [ Rush Valley ]
[ Occυpaтιon ;; [ ғor non-ѕoldιerѕ only ]
[ Faмιly/Relaтιonѕнιps ;; [ His mother, Andrea Falco, was taken by disease, and his father, Matthew Michaeliss, grew old but is currently working as chef at on of the bakerys, or whatever. No siblings. ]
[Eхтraѕ/Oтнerѕ ;; [ Did I mention how much he hates people? But he likes bread. ]
[ Cнaracтer Sυммary ;; [ Well. The childhood nickname 'Pretty Boy' doesn't come hand in hand, but he's not ugly. He has messy, shoulder length black hair and sharp, defiant ice blue eyes that pretty much shoot daggers at you, if he's not doing that physically. He's like, pretty tall, hitting around 6'3 and you can say that he looks always angry. His expression never crosses over to happy. He never smiles, laughs, or even talks to people. Only two words can describe him. Emo, and EVILEVILEVILEVIL. I swear, he gives off that vibe that says 'Come within 5 feet of me and IMM SHANK YOU.' He is cold, antisocial, and unforgiving. No living soul has dared puncture his living hell, and nobody will probably ever. He fights with an unreleased fury that he barelt hold in when not in battle. He's like...an ostridge. Always has his head in the dirt. [metaphorically, of course.] The only physical beings that go underground are the bodies buried of the people he kills. Like i said, evillllllll. Cold-hearted, and he's that close to ditching his squad, but has no other way to release his anger but in battle. ]

Sebastian ran his fingers along the smooth, silver blade of his dagger. He dragged it across the sharpener again, leaning baack slightly and adjusting his mask as the sparks erupted from the wheel and danced around, before slowly fading into the prolonged darkness. Yes, the blade was sharper and he took in the shrill squeal as the metal scraped the wheel again, and again. How he would deeply enjoy the feeling of this cold stel cutting through warm flesh. What an utterly, utterly primitive man.
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